This was so vivid and interesting and good. You've tweaked their relationships (not that much) and the world they live in, but kept their voices so well. And you've woven in the possibility of future discontents and future stories. I've been pondering on this piece all morning. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2011-04-12 05:14 pm (UTC)